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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wtf, no offense but you built it up to go nowhere there was no action!

inkytaurinkytaurabout 2 years agoAuthor

Sorry that pretty much all the sex happened offscreen. Plot, character, dialogue — all the actual story parts just pushed it out. But — they lived happily ever after, y'know? Maybe I should write an addendum that's just all the sex that there wasn't room for in the actual story :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

An addendum that gives us some action--maybe we have a few different skips, starting with some of the earliest, and progressing from there. If you wanted to could actually sneak in some dialogue and develop their relationship, but I'd be fine with the only plot being Eina slowly changing her opinion on whether or not she wants the curse lifted.

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I like sweet, romantic, and sexy stories about centaurs and other monstergirls. Happy sex, happy endings, happily-ever-after, and enough character and plot and drama to make it all worth the effort. I don't post a lot, but I hope you'll like my stories enough to read them.