All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

Good story slightly marred by lack of proofreading. Not sure where Alfonso is going to feature in future?

needs continuation. Feels like I'm just left hanging at the end. And it may just be my imagination, but I can't help but feel Hektor has more to contribute to Sarah's weekend. Or will Michael monopolize her?

Can not wait for part 2

Seems most all my favorite authors are women. I like it when stories are kept to a page or two at a time, and look forward to part two of this one. Great first story, but do pay attention to spelling/grammar.

What a wonderful read, I do hope part two will be out soon

You need to have someone proofread your work.

Good start to what seems like a wonderful adventure. Well written. Please continue.