by mybaby
Can't help but think this is in the wrong category. Seems more suited for "erotic coupling". That being said what is with that ending? Or rather where is the ending, because there isn't one. You stopped in the middle of a new plot line. It's not a cliff hanger, it's a middle of the road hanger.
The author(s) paid so much attention to the size of the penis they got the female anatomy inside out (or rather outside in). A common and annoying mistake on this site.
A beautifully written romantic story, with an engaging plot, and enhanced by tender romance that supplements the plot but does not dominate it. Superb work.