All Comments on 'Chanel and Ashley, A Love Story Ch. 03'

It's funny, I thought this chapter the best thus far, as it builds on the physical attraction between Chanel and Ashley.... and yet it's received the least feedback. Did I go wrong somewhere or is this just how multi-part stories fall?

Loved the entire multi-part story. You created an erotically suspenseful storyline around two uniquely interesting, believable characters. As a near hopeless romantic, the ending (?) perfect — sure maybe predictable, but getting there was the so enjoyable journey. This reader at least wanted them together so badly, and isn’t that one of the feelings you wanted to achieve here. If you have more to share between the two young women great; if not, love the last few lines (not to mention the intensity of their love making). Just hope you continue to share your imagination and talent. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great feedback Migbird, thank you for that. All round, exactly what I was hoping to elicit. Not ready to end their story there, they have more to learn and share yet. Watch this space...