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--SNAP!--
“Robert, how do you feel?”
“Really good, excuse me Ralph, I gotta find my wife. It’s been too long.”
Ralph did not place too much faith in hypnosis, but he hoped for the best. He had to go wake Delores up. He hoped she had a change in attitude.
- COMMENTS
114FSOover 1 year agoA little convoluted at first. Had to make up a line up card. Then it started to make sense. A second chapter would be nice, simply to see the outcome and if everything worked.
PotSub206over 4 years agoA little incoherent, but I get where you are going with the idea. I would like to help you clean it up a bit and formulate an outline to develop the story. Let me know if you would accept assistance
NVDiceGuyover 4 years agoHard to follow who was I. The speaking roles. Had to read each paragraph multiple times
Anonymousover 4 years agoCan Bobcat explain the story to the rest of us as I am totally confused.
