by TheRealKat
This story is well written. Sensual and seductive bringing teasing seduction to the mind. I am looking forward to more chapters in this story.
Damn! I could tell this story was going to be amazing half-way through the first page! I love it when characters are mentally guided into depravity and not just zapped into slaves.
Really hope we get to see more very soon! Maybe Sam and Jen decide to be an official couple? It would be fun to see Elise act happy for them while secretly being jealous of Jen!
More pleas, this was so erotic. You need to continue this story, it was a very fun read!
Loved it, loved it, loved it! So very well done! I understand if you are hesitant to write more chapters as sometimes people get when they believe a specific sorry set in one of their works has been the peak of their writing career so far and do not want to risk lowering the standards. But man, after this wonderful chapter? I definitely feel like you could make something truly special in a sequel!
Regardless, thank you very much for sharing and until next time.
Well written, very erotic, exceptionally hot, and goodness, am I satisfied. Please keep writing!