All Comments on 'Changing a Tire Changed My Life'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

2nd part 🤤🥲

KrissyfurKrissyfur6 months ago

It's a very good story. Only criticism I have is that you need to work on the POV. It is mixed up, Some first perso, some second person and some third person.. There were a couple of times where it was confusing and had to reread the line to figure who was doing what to whom, Again it is a good story, and I enjoyed it,

BetaDickSlaveBetaDickSlave5 months ago

Looking forward to Part 2 ;0

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Hello, I am Soltic. I am most definitely not a lunatic. Of course, that is what one may expect a 'lunatic' to say. You know how lunatics are supposedly affected by the phases of Luna - moon of Gaia? I'm not like that. I am affected by the solar cycle instead, hence Soltic. T...