All Comments on 'Changing Mouse'

Finish the story!!!

Well done. "trueish" or at least I can imagine it, and some nice character development. Keep it up please.

Then get a decent storyline. This was simply implausible even for fiction.

I'm excited to see this story progress. I'm stoked for the next installment. Please don't keep us waiting too long

Please write another chapter or two? I want to know if some of these girls are mean just because they have to watch her Friday night and if they so fit. Maybe she can be his little girl forever.

Isn't there more? Please, But if not, thanks for this.

I think this is the fifth time I've read this. I know it was just a scene, but I really really want to know what happens. Please write the whole story.

Love how this is going. Very well written and imaginative. I hope Mouse gets more stories.

This one is very original. But changing those diaper, I would think she should blow him every day.

Over 2 years ago? You have decided not to continue this story to the end, 364 days. What happens for the summer? How and where will he change her diaper?