All Comments on 'Changing Room'

Nice buildup... good characterization, great description. Even better was the gradual increase in tension with realistic yet still-exciting dénouement. I am impressed.

Everything erotica should be - credible, a good build and a great finale.

Well done

What can I say? That I wish I had been lucky enough to be Steve, for starters. I am proud to be your friend. Gary

I love your work Beth.....more please!!!

...about my greatest fantasy! Thank you - and please come to Australia for your next shopping trip! :-)

well written

one of the best dressing room stories i've read

please write more stories like this!

That really floated my boat. Great story very well presented and written.

Changing Room is what got me hooked on Travel Girl's Stories...first this then came Art Model...Changing Room is one of my favorite stories on Literotica...and def my favorite "changing room" story. wish there were more stories as good as this one, and as well written.

i just love your pacing, your clarity, and your descriptions. and with such class! ive read nearly all your work, and love it. great erotic literature.

Can't wait to go shopping.

Beth, I've just re-read Changing Room, and it is as exciting this time as it was the first! But this time I see you've won another contest. I'm not surprised. Well done, congratulations! Next time you go shopping, please come to Washington. I'll be delighted to bring you things to try on. Gary

I think I might be hanging around the women's dressing room more after reading this story.

I have to tell you...you are a master story teller! I really enjoyed your story. It was a huge turn on for me. I also really enjoyed reading your real life experiences in Munich. I think reading about others real life sexual adventures are a total turn on. I have written about my own exhibitionist experiences with my wife Kristen on Literotica (Life and Times of a Horny Couple). Having others read about our experiences was really exciting for both of us.

I hope you will continue to write more erotic stories about your actual experiences. You are fantastic!! save425@aol.com

thank you baby. i would love to watch from the next room, and play...

Slow, delicious build-up, and the finish feels much more credible than "and then everyone had nineteen mind-blowing orgasms."

Hot Hot Hot...Travel Girl has inspired me to put on several changing room shows of my own

Very nice and seductive writing. Love the detail and the slow easy buildup to erotic peak. Well Done.

Jacquioh2

Wow I was immersed from beginning to end and it read as if it really happened !

would have been fun if the security guard found them in the car..a big black guard with a 10 inch cock for her to suck

Very nice writing.

I loved this. It is really a great story.

TravelGirl, VERY nice story. Excellent imagery, an absolutely great read. I loved the slow pace that Beth created, no; commanded. The fact that you were able to bring it so passionately to life, her desire to be watched, his desire to watch; even the clueless sales girl...

Your use of imagery and seductively slow pace really got me revved up, and i will greatly enjoy reading this story to my boyfriend later this evening. Thanks for a great read, and please please keep the words (and me) flowing!!

Damn - erotic at its Best ...thank you! BOTH parties equally enjoyed their little game - very nice

A very arousing story and enjoyable to read, looking forward to read your other stories now

that was an amazing story about two strangers having an intamiate experience in a shopping centre/carpark

Terrific story. Loved the build-up, believable and very erotic! Nice flow and a satisfying ending. Excellent fantasy stuff and made more exciting by keeping it "real" Great Job!

I love your stories, Beth is a great character. Got me very aroused.

well wow wht can i say. would love to read more,keep up the good work.

You are absolutely the best writer on Literotica. I love your real life stories that are filled with story and substance instead of mindless fucking and never ending climaxes. Please submit more stuff.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. In fact, I loved this story, for the tension it built up, and the detailed picture that was built in my mind. It felt like I was the older gentleman, peeping at Beth through the curtains. Very erotic.

Very well written. A great story!

Another delightful long buildup of sexual tension followed by an erotic climax. I am so glad I discovered your stories we share many common fantasies and hot buttons. I am looking forward to reading more of your work

I really enjoyed the story Travel Girl. Being a man in his mid 50's I can fully appreciate the treat this guy was having with this younger attractive lady. I could feel my self in his shoes from your excellent writing. Hilton Head Massage was hot as well. I highly recommend it to those who enjoyed this story. Keep writing.

Once again; I salute your literary abilities, along with Manu & Laurel it seems? Please continue sharing your wonderful erotic experiences, with like-minded authoresses!

...to get to The Mall more often!

Excellent storytelling!

great story loved the teasing i love to tease and liked the car bj

That was insanely erotic, great job travel girl!

That was a very hot story. Thank you

That was so nicely written; so gentle and teasing it brought it to a special climax. I loved it. Thank you. Jim

Excellant story, got the juices flowing here and more. Thank you.

You do a great job. I love reading your stuff. The thinking between actions is as good as the actions themselves. The characters--the main character, especially--is realistic and likable. I have also read "Munich" and loved it, and I look forward to reading other of your stuff. Thanks!

What a hot story, and so well told. Loved you built up the tension. More like this please.

Very much enjoyed your pacing. Very sexy, very hot story.

What a wonderful story and wonderfully told too! I like the gentleness and courtesy displayed throughout the story by both parties...I think the respect shown by each to each other was very erotic and I could imagine being in the changing room while someone viewed from outside...that was so sexy!

I would love to read more from this author...wonderful!

A Beautiful, Beautiful Story - Thank Toy for Sharing Your Talent With Us.

I need to find out just where you do your shopping!

Perhaps a follow-up where you do go lingerie shopping and have another erotic experience.

Great writing! Had me going the whole way. Great pacing and well written.

A very nice story, well told.

Very erotic story and well written. Feels like a real story of a sexually confident woman. Loved the slow build up and the characters. It has a gentleness not often found in erotica. Believable.

Very nice erotic story.

Great

One of my favorite fantasies. Never happened to me in a store but I have heard from a few guys about them getting an inadvertent show. None of them ended up the way yours did, however. Great job. Looking forward to reading your other submissions.

three way (three-way) (2)

eye catching (eye-catching)

changing (room) curtain

most gray hair (mostly)

discrete (discreet) (2)

6 feet tall (2) (MENTIONING THAT HE WAS 6 FEET TALL TWICE SERVED NO USEFUL PURPOSE WHATSOEVER!!!! I DID NOT THINK THAT HE HAD GROWN OR SHRUNK IN THE RELATIVELY SHORT INTERIM!!!! )

night gown (nightgown) (3)

34 full C cup breasts (MENTIONING HER BRA SIZE TWICE SERVED NO USEFUL PURPOSE WHATSOEVER!!!! I DID NOT FORGET THIS FACT SINCE IT WAS FIRST REVEALED MERE MINUTES AGO!!!!)

moved his had (hand)

one less layer (fewer)

few (-minutes) more minutes

grudgingly, but willingly (RELUCTANTLY BUT DISPOSED OR INCLINED TO !?!?!?!? MUTUALLY EXCLUSIVE TERMS!!!!)

one time (one-time)

rare events, but that by being unique (RARE EVENTS ARE FEW IN NUMBER A UNIQUE EVENT NUMBERS ONLY ONE CONTRADICTORY EXPRESSION !!!!)

Thanks for a story that feels realistic. Your description of the events came across as very real. This type of erotica is enjoyable to me because of the realism. Thank you for using your considerable writing skills to portray a personal, intimate experience in such an open way.

A very enjoyable, slow burner!

Absolutely love this story and many times I have put on a similar show but without the bonus of actual physical contact subsequently ....

Thankyou.

I, and many other people have enjoyed it. Correct English is important but don't get too upset by people who carp. Incidentally I think that it is ok to say "one less layer" but you should say "one fewer layers" - the plural is the decider.

Very well written, you are very talented. Extremely hot, I'd be lying if I said I won't be thinking of you and your adventure for some time to come. Thank you.

What a lovely sexy story. I especially like the part in the car as I can imagine how hot and wet you would have been by then after putting on such a show. And I love having my titties played with in the car too. When I know there is a chance of getting caught just the slightest touch sends me crazy. Before long I have allowed my lover to push up my skirt and pull down my knickers so that he can push his tongue inside my pussy to make sure I am sopping wet and ready to finger quicky to orgasam before anyone comes along and might see us. A great story that's left me wishing he was here now. Thanks

Incredible story lady. Very hot and had me stroking myself before page 2. This would be one of the ultimate fantasies for me. I've caught little glimpses in dressing rooms but they weren't being offered and certainly nothing like this ever happened. I wish. Wow. Thank you.

Somehow my wife managed to get me into a clothing store. I hate shopping, she loves it, so it's a constant weekend thing for me to try and figure some way of squirming out of it.

Then, I had to sit out there in one of the silly chairs while she tried on everything in the store. At one point it hit me, often I was getting flashed as she changed, the curtains didn't quite do the job. Then in came three women, carrying clothes, into the other changing rooms they went. Now I was getting glimpses of them as they were all changing, coming out to where the mirrors were, spinning around, back in, undress again. At first they were coy, then I guess I became part of the furniture. I never saw so many tits in one place in my life, even a couple of hairy vaginas. One gal, nice looking was real careless, finally it hit me she was teasing me.

Hell, the wife and I ended up in a park after, didn't even get home, I think the wife expected it since she had no panties on.

Been back 3 times now, looking forward to next weekend. Shopping ain't so bad, and the wife thinks it's hilarious.

But, that one trip cost me $330.

Oh, well.

Unfortunately my wife would NEVER think of doing that to/for me. Oh well, I can now dream anyway. Thanks for a great story!

All of your writing has a quality equal in style to perhaps Hemingway (you have a way) and so many other brilliant authors. I'm sure you've considered this.

"Changing Room" could be a screen play. You're way off of any measurable scale.

Quality story, didn't need ending... store was good enough ending almost spooled it

Very hott story!!

Can't say that I've never tryed to sneek a peek at a woman in a changing room

This story inspired me to drive home with one breast exposed. Thank you!

Well written and very sexy story

One of the most erotic stories ever read. I thought of running across someone like you.

So nicely and easily written made it very believable. Great job.

A huge fantasy of mine. So well told.

I love finding stories like this one. Really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read more of your adventures.

Excellent. Excellent. I read this story a few years back. Excellent.

signed ... lowkeyone

Very nicely done. I love that you built the eroticism from the situation and not (until the end) with graphic depictions of sex acts.

Very erotic and enjoyable. I once had a similar experience, but it never went this far.

I loved this story, very well told, and very sexy, my luck has never been quite that good, your very lucky,

This young lady knows how to tell a story and would be a fantasy come true for any man. When I read this I became as aroused as the guy she was with nice she was so good at making it so believable. I am so glad there are ladies out there like her. I hope she realizes how very special she is!

This is a wonderfully erotic story, so perfectly written with a terrific buildup. I’ll be your Steve anytime 😊

Good story. Well written. Arousing. Travel Girl is articulate and story is believable.

Very erotic. Lovely slow build up to the final climatic end!

. She was in control. Very erotic, very exciting.

Awesome, totally love the teasing. It’s all about getting there. Tracey loves to tease and let the guy think he is control and I see you like to do the same. Totally enjoyed and looking forwards to reading the rest of your stories. Thanks

Honestly was loving until the ‘unlike other women’ comment. Took me right out of it and didn’t even read the rest. What a shame. No need to write women who enjoy sex as total pick-mes. Most women enjoy sex.

What a delightfully arousing and sensuous story. I loved how everything was subtle, unplanned and yet so erotic. The idea of being "spied" upon while in a public dressing room is very much a turn-on and their parking lot encounter was equally erotic...nicely written, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories ;)

Optimistically, thank you for giving me this fantasy. Realistically, thanks for another fetish I will never actually get to partake in.