All Comments on 'Chapter 02: Daughter In-Law'

in a story like this I hope that the son finds out that his father is a fucking animal and his wife is the same. The best thing for this poor son of a bitch is for him to break off relations with both of the worthless motherfuckers. When the dad gets old and wants his son to bring him depends in a rest home, he can shit in the floor and remember the son he used to have and the grandchildren of his son and another decent woman he will marry on down the line. The son in this tale is the only human being in the family. The rest are just pieces of shit. The woman in the tale is a cheating slut so when Richard gets old she will be long gone. He will die alone, hated and desperate for any contact with anyone except some rest home orderly who will let him lay there in his own waste.

Nice chapter there ganjaisbad. I enjoy the delicate blend of nc/reluctance and sexual craving on the daughter in-laws's part. Can hardly wait to read where the old man marks her body next time he takes her.

knocked the sweet little girl up instead of his son making her pregnant. She is just doing what she feels is right for being the little slut fuck toy to her fiance's dad. Good story and it needs more chapters before its finished. Thanks......Rich

or anyone else thinks of the story it always makes me wonder why people would want to write about such despicable behavior.Unless consequences ensue.Pistolpackinpete

I can't say that the theme you've chosen isn't pretty vile. But as far as the writing goes you seem to rush things. The build-up was slightly better than the first chapter, but then you blow through the sex like a bullet. Try giving a little more thought and description to the actual act itself.

I hope there's more.

And this one did not disappoint!

Family is always enriched with addition of sexy daughter in law.

Savita, my daughter in law is also a sexy Hindu lady and providing me extra sensual sex during absence of my son.

Recently we made love on their marital bed and it was fabulous.

Sex with in laws runs in our family

This sexy sluts going to get husband to use condoms on honeymoon while her fathering law fucks her pregnant