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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well that’s not what I was expecting, not in a bad way, in fact it was pretty hot, but I was definitely surprised the story went that way. Thanks KS

ThisFNGThisFNG8 months agoAuthor

Thank you, KS :)

I'm glad we could subvert expectations in a positive way for you. I'm apparently struggling with getting the epilogue moved out of review purgatory soon, but we'll see.

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