All Comments on 'Charity Dinner'

Thank you QuietBedlam21. This was fun. A whole story based on word play.

Please keep writing and I will keep coming back to read.

This was really good!

Clever, witty story with great conversation. Very well written. Thanks a bunch.

You’re a rockstar. 10/10, cute and funny, would recommend. ✨

Excellent read, love the excruciating puns and the stilted conversation over the faux pas. Definitely 5 stars. Please keep on writing.

This is fabulous. The puns, the witty lines, the things said and unsaid. Loved the way you write. Would be waiting for more to come from you. (No pun intended)

I loved the blurry description of drunk sex. Gave it real atmosphere and pace

I love well written “slow burn” erotica with a creative plot and rounded characters. Charity Dinner ticks all those boxes. Also, I like yarns where the sex doesn’t swamp the plot (too many Lit yard are ‘all sex and no plot’). Thanks for sharing. 5 stars and added to my favourites.

Totally enjoyable read from beginning to end. Dixon Sider and Anita Wang are a great names to write a story around. I wonder what you could do with Ben Dover or Horace Peters? All in all, it's worth more than five stars. Thanks.