by be0wulf
I think I liked this one because that is a fantasy of mine...I could totally see myself doing that!
Once again your humor comes shining through! Humor coupled with a steamy sex scene makes for enjoyable reading. Your characters are so easy to identify with; you definitely have a gift for pulling the reader in. Your writing itself could be a little tighter, a little more polished, but frankly, polished or not, your story got a physical as well as an intellectual response. Kudos.
I love the way you introduce humor into your erotica...makes for great sex. Enjoyed this story and put it under favorites...keep writing please.
until now...and I enjoyed this very much. You have a good sense of humor on the boards, and it comes through in your writing.
Honey123