All Comments on 'Charlie & Miley Ch. 06'

So as they fucked like rabbits and Gwen is four,how come they have no more kids?.

OK Frozenhero1, you have style, a good eye for intrigue, If this were in book form I’d buy it. The explicit/ graphic sex scene’s were well done but the story line would have still been compelling without them. Truly well done. Thank you

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Top Notch!

11/10!!!!!

I really enjoyed this whole series, I gave you 5 stars across the board. It was very well written and the characters are very believable. The only question I have is what happened to Charlie and Miley's other children? Miley always said throughout the series that she wanted at least two children.

Great job amazing story cried a few times. Thank you

My 3rd time reading through the entire series and I enjoyed it just as much as the first time. The characters, the drama, and the epilogue with Miley and Gwen was just perfect

Thank you for giving me these characters to care about. Well played!

It's always a shame when a great story finally concludes because you want more but I have to give props to the author. An ending that wasn't crazy, or unbelievable. It just seemed to be a perfect way to finish off a very entertaining read. 5 STARS

This story was hands down one of the best I've ever read. The character growth and development is astounding. I love how you wrapped it all up.

Damn what a series this was (all 29 parts of Beauty & The Geek + this). The longest and one of the best I've ever read. Did it all in one sitting (with a sleep break) as I couldn't peel myself away. The ending was sweet. Hope I can find more like this. Yes, there was a lot of annoying drama, some that felt very forced and contrived, but overall it was a great journey and one I'm glad I took. Kind of wish there was more actually. Still so much that could have been added.

I love every chapter, like so many others comments, best story I've read on Literotica. Great ending!!! So glad it had one, unlike so many others that don't even have an ending.

I got 1/2 way through the beauty/geek series before I realized I’d read it years ago. By that time, I was hooked again. I enjoyed it very much.(both series.)

The last paragraph made all this reading worth it. Thank you.

The worst thing about a good story is that eventually you get to the end.

But this wasn't a good story - this was a very, very good story !

Rapier

i cried

this was the best story ive read on here, the sex was great but the story line was wonderful im sure you could continue it, good JOB

If you ever wanted to write another story in this world, but don't want to do a sequel, here's an interesting idea... a story inside of a story. If you ever saw "Rosencrantz and Gildenstern Are Dead" or "Lion King 1 1/2", you get the basic idea. It's a story using existing characters from the main story, but going on WHILE the main plotline is happening. My original idea was to re-tell the events of "Beauty and the Geek", but from the POV of Brian and Stacy... but maybe change the POV of different points from different characters, like Darla, the parents, Haley, or even a chapter told by Brock Edwards. A lot of possibilities.

This is my favorite story after beauty and the geek. Awesome.

Ibthink this series could continue on. Please, I have read it like 3 times and can read it again. Keep on keepin on. Lol

LOVED IT!!! Hated to see it end!!! I was surprised that Charlie and Miley weren't expecting another baby, Gwen was 4..

Great story!!!

Fantastic story, hate to see it end.Hope you continue to write.

Fan

I would love to see you continue the series thanks 5star 🌟gpa

Still think the first 29 chapter arc was better. If author had added an epilogue and cut out some of the stuff in these six chapters, it could have easily worked as is. Or add a flashforward chapter to the this final chapter as #30. I did not understand the need to degrade Stacy like that. It seemed that at the end of the other arc Stacy had come to accept things with regards to Brian and to move forward. Then we find out she is an alcoholic (wouldn't there be signs of that earlier at college and parties) and she is so paranoid that Brian doesn't lover her and is being unfaithful with Sam that she goes full blown degraded nympho waking up in a frat house bed or with Chip (who suddenly is a total opportunistic asshole) virtually every night for multiple weeks and blows up her friendship with Miley? Was the purpose of this degradation of herself just a way to make Brian look better and more mature? Ick. Stacy was one of the most level headed (besides Charlie) in high school. Meanwhile the stuff with Jack, Haley, and Victoria was just weird and out of left field. Was that put there specifically to have the (near) threesome scenes? Seems like it. There were moments in this six chapter arc (including some hot sex scenes) but the vast majority of them were all Miley and Charlie interactions. Some humor too. But again pull Stacy through the mud was awful. And why the heck couldn't Brian take a week off to go see her when Stacy was vulnerable and breaking up with him. Or even more sensible since they weren't hurting for cash at the time even prior to the HBO deal... have Stacy come on the tour with you and defer a semester of school. Heck much of the separation was during summer anyways. Seemed very artificial and intentional to degrade Stacy to make Brian now look mature and steady so he comes off as the white knight. The other story arc was 5/5, this is.4/5 for the plot and dialog, but 4.5/5 because of their naughty sex scenes.

One of the most fun stories I've ever read on this site. Right from the begining. Sorry to see it end, but it was a good ending. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing with us. The easiest

5-😊😊😊😊😊 yet !

Fine work. You write very well and even a dumb guy like me could follow the story. Keep up the fine work.

I loved the story thank you.I would love to see you continue the story in the future if you can 5stars for the series thanks.

thank you. it was so good. i am glad i started reading this, was an experience

I loved reading this series, brilliantly written, beautifully crafted.

What a great series! Great reading. Thanks for the entertainment.

Thanks for a great series thoroughly enjoyed the both of them .

I skipped the sex scenes half way through the series, because the drama and story was that good. (The naughty scenes were great as well)

This is the second time I've read this story. I love the fact that Charlie and Milie refuse to let anything keep them apart. The characters all have matured wonderfully. Hope to see more stories like this.

An excellent story. Lots of drama, and the characters all change over the arc of the story, but things work out for the best, a classic happy ending.

5/5

Awesome!!

At least it's a happy ending...

A great story but i would have like to see it pan out in its entirety 5 out of 5

I must say that I have read some really interesting plots for stories. I enjoyed this very much well written, nice mix - I will definitely take that to my own stories - of career and dreams. Adding The Beauty and the Geek to my favorites.

OMG, i binge-read this whole beauty and the geek + the charlie&miley storie during my vacation... i would have given 10 stars if possible... the only thing i missed(for myself) is Miley playing the dominatrix and dressed herself in leather boots more often... well written!

Loved this thank you. I've been reading on literotica for 6 months or so. This is by far my favorite series so far. The sex got into areas I didn't care for at the end, still I couldn't stop skimming forward to follow the story.

This was totally awesome glued to these stories

I gotta be honest I didn’t exactly love this story as much as Beauty and the Geek, but god this ending made my heart melt. Im glad everything worked out for our main characters! Perfection. :)

Why didn't they have another child? They had planned to have at least two children?

Ok I think I gave 5 stars to everyone if the stories in these two series. I could not stop reading. I spent 2 work days and most of a weekend glued to these stories. I could not stop. Well done.

5 Stars, you sure know your stuff.

Brilliant.

Keep it coming.

"So I can get married and have babies too," Gwen reasoned.

All of Miley's teenaged sexual adventures suddenly flashed before her eyes, "Forget it, young lady. You can't date any boys until you're thirty."

LOL.... Mama going all Mama Tiger .... LMAO....

Great story series by the way

What a great wrap up for Charlie and Miley and Stacy and Brian love stories. It just goes to show you how true love can endure. Well done 5 stars

Started a comment and somehow lost it... this is the best I have read here. Really! I have paid for many, less entertaining stories. Character development, dialog, suspense (what would happen next!), love, betrayal, anger, all these emotions and more, provided a wealth of options fully explored. If you are not writing professionally you are missing an opertunetly. I realize getting published is a nightmare. I wish you the best and look forward to more from you.

By far the best literotica piece ever written. Can't help but reread it regularly and am impressed every time. If only it could be made by HBO like captain darkness but to racy even for them! And it would need to be EXACTLY as written so script approval like charlie and Brian! Fifty Shades eat your heart out! Magnificent story, expertly constructed.. a true gem.

Ok by far the longest story I read while it was a bit repetitive at points it was an okay read

I absolutely freaking ADORED this entire series. I love Charlie and Miley. They love each other so much.

Yeah there was lots of drama, but there was so much love between them and with their friends.

Keep writing!!! You are truly talented!

I’ve read plenty of long multi chapter stories but this has to be one of my favorites of all time. The detail and story. The intense sex with the constant love. It’s enough to make a grown man cry and get a boner at the same time. Amazing job

Only one daughter? Seems like there is more to the story. Stacy and Brian was a big leap. Keep the story going.

Really enjoyable read. Love the whole series my only complaint is the not all the sex scenes need to last so long. But still worth the time to read.

Absolutely Loved it.

One of the best love stories that I have read so far on Literotica. Love the great Happily Ever After ending. Gets my 5+ star vote.

Cleanup

Strong Start. I really enjoyed the first 10-16 Chapters. The Story went along fine.

The Dirty Talk was definitely the highlight of the entire Charlie & Miley Storyline. That was excellently written.

After that Chapter 17+, it became really frustrating to read. The Sex scenes were Copy paste. The Storyline got stale. The Drama surrounding Brian was ridiculous.

Although the last 2/3 Chapters or so got better again, reasonable Story plots. Sex scenes were unfortunately ruined for me by previous Chapters, so I mostly skipped them.

Some Facts/Storyline checking.

They've been together 5 years as a couple, Miley is 25? Didn't this Story start when they all were 18? Means they're a couple 7 Years, mixed up other numbers too (which I don't remember right now).

If you were to remove a lot of Sex scenes from the middle Chapters 16-27/28 and leave the Storyline mostly intact, I'd like the Story more.

The Story itself is good enough to not have every single encounter between Miley and Charlie and or Start with Sex and drag it out over an entire page. Though you maybe should've given them a Hobby or interest they shared other than Sex (like you mentioned at some point).

the basic Storyline and the Dirty Talk from Miley (that really blew me away) really did it for me.

Added to Favorites and 5 Stars regardless of my criticism. It still was a very very enjoyable read.

Thank you! That gave my GF and I endless pleasure, both literarily and sexually. Please consider writing more about Charlie, Miley, et al. We are sad to see the series end!!

Thank you so much for this entire series, I have been obsessed since I found the first chapter. Wasn’t able to binge it like some others, but it’s been on my mind for a week. Incredible story that had a great mix of sex and wholesome. Thank you than you thank you

Hey wonderful story, very captivating and great ending. There's just one point that keeps bugging me about Sam. She asked 5 millions from HBO for the first season and only reported 2.5 millions to Brian and Charlie? With negotiations and all they wouldn't get as much as a final price but it still seems as if she cheated them from a whole lot to get back at Brian...

Binged it in 2 days. Thanks for this, very well done. Sad to say goodbye to the characters, though!

This entire series is five stars. The ending should be ten stars. Great story.

Hey, thank you for writing such a great series and giving it a proper ending. Please let us know if you ever want to link your work that you sell. I would support your writing any day.

Read it for the second time, it's so damn good.

My second time reading this series. All I can say is unbelievable!!! I truly enjoy the relationships, the characters, the sex scenes. Absolutely my favorite series on this site. I only wish it had another 29 chapters I could read about Charlie and Miley all day long.

Without a doubt 5 star+. This story was hard to put down. Enjoyed Both Beauty and the Geek and these final chapters. Excellent way to wrap up the series. You nailed teenage drama right on the head, and brought them into adulthood eloquently. Great Writer!

Epic ending dude...really well done.

Loved the story. The ending was great. Thank you for writing.

Enjoyed reading all of it, from the beginning to the ending, and everything in between.

From the start of Beauty and the Geek through the Epilogue here, you have it exactly right. I could read about these people and their families until they are old and grey. Five stars for each installment. Thank you!

Really like Charlie & Miley all grown up! Good job!

Without writing an entire book report on how awesome this epic story was, it really felt like this story was written just for me.

Just one of the many things that was so well done here was that you managed to have nearly constant drama and put me on edge wondering if the characters I'd come to love had finally gone a direction in which I couldn't cheer for them, but, each time, you managed to reign it in just enough so that we still recognize and love them.

Really great story! I loved it! I hope there will be more stories like this in here. I've read from the beginning till the end, and I have to say that what you did with Charlie and Miley's relationship was beautiful and I think that this was an exciting and thrilling series and it was sappy for me to read this chapter.

Enjoyed reading all of it. From the beginning to the ending, and everything in between.

Just really well done....... Flawed but likeable characters, great realistic story lines and fun dialogue.... 5*****

This story was absolutely amazing, the whole thing! It actually reminds me of the man I intend to marry XD I loved it! You are absolutely wonderful at describing exactly what's happening and it makes readers feel as if the story were reality :)

Great job! :)

It's taken me two days to read the entirety of beauty and the geek, reminds me of mine and my wife's relationship sometimes with all the geeky stuff :)

Thanks for this story and hope to read more from you

Hi just wanted to say this is a great series I just felt this last chapter seem rushed and not quite long enough.

This seriously is one of my favorite series (and I've just read the first entry a few days ago). Though, I sort of got confused about everyone's ages. The plot is really good, it swayed my emotions every single chapter, and the smut is really erotic. Hope you add more stories like this one.

Couldn't help but keep reading

My boyfriend showed this to me. I have been stuck since. Will there be a series of Beauty and the geek?

i can't believe myself spent 2 days to read beauty & geeks and this one, absolutely great.

keep it up man.

That has got to be the largest amount of investment i've ever put into a literotica story, what a ride! All the twist, turns and deviations kept me hooked and not to mention Brian and Stacy's clusterfuck of a relationship even though I kinda wanted the Sam Brian relationship to work out. This was simply just more than smut, it's an unbreakable romance between two teens that happens to have an obscene amount of sex...

-Shardfrog

More of this series. It's just great!

I stumbled across this back in 2011 when chapter 5 was on the new stories page and have been hooked since. All the ups and down drama and masterful storytelling have kept me company for four years. It's heartbreaking to see it end, but what a ride it has been and I thank you for sharing it

I stumbled on to this last night and in a matter of about 7 hours read every part of it. i was so enthralled with the characters and details it was so real my mind was doing back flips reading it. Great Job!

It would be fantastic if you would revisit the characters again.

I'm referring to my comment not your chapter by the way. I want to thank you for a truly memorable ride. I guess what I liked most about your work is that your characters aren't perfect and don't pretend to be. Just like in real life.

I hope at some point you will decide to revisit Charlie and Miley's world. Maybe a short story or two revolving around some of the other characters.

Whatever you decide just don't stop writing. And again thank you.

... Said it all in the first comment. I, too, am so sorry to see this saga come to a close. I reread this series every now and then just because it's so enjoyable. Thank you so much.

VisualPerv

PS - I know you said you're done with "We're Screwed", but come on... :-)

What more can I ask for? I'll just recylcle my finishing comments for Beauty & Geek as they apply equally to Charlie & Miley.

Thanks a ton for the entertaining read, I'm off to see what else you've shared!

J

speechless!!

loved every single part of it!

amazing..

hats off, really

Both series are amazing. Just the right amount of everything, from the drama to the sex. These stories would make a great book, I would buy it. Wonderful work! I look forward to reading more. I've bookmarked your profile, you're definitely a favorite.

From Beauty and the geek to Charlie and Miley, this story has been amazing. Loved it very much :)

I'm so amazed by this entire series. I love every single bit of it. Its funny how it sorta reflects my relationship with my wife. Thanks for writing such an amazing piece of awesome! :) You've made my life a lot better knowing that I'm not the only one that has their dreams furfilled.

i am proud to say that i am one of the lucky readers of this great story, charlie and miley made a great impact for me as a reader. There may mever be a story in literotica as good as this one. MY FAVORITE STORY ..

Thank you frozenhero1 for creating this grear story, please make more stories in the future.

-N

am going to really miss these characters ,

xxxhugsxxx

great story. loved it, but the epilogue fell flat with being so short and not really looking ahead for the group of friends. i found the last sentences funny, but what about more kid(s) for charlie and miley or stacey and brian? if this is it, it kind of fell flat for me.

I was blown away by this series. I think I read the entire thing over three days off and on. Just.. wow. I hope you have other published for profit work. Wish you could list it here.

After 35 chapters of two high school seethearts i think i can say that i am satisfied (in more ways than one). I love your descriptiveness and the imagery it provides. Like my fellow commenters, i would love to see how stacy and brian continue.

One thing that kinda bothered me was the short chapters. If you had just made them into 8 longer (12 pages or so each) chapters that wouldve been nicer than going back to your submissions and reloading a fresh story.

If the story reflects how you are then i think we share a few fetishes......hehe.....

Overall it was a very cohesive story and loved the realistic ending!

Hey man, I just wanted you to know that this is the absolute best series I've ever read on literotica. You're ability to actually create characters that readers fall in love with is amazing! And of course the sex scenes have been steamy and hot! I'm sad to see the end of Charlie and Miley...and of course the rest of the crew. Nonetheless I still look forward to reading the rest of your work. On a side note, every one of your fans read MORE THAN 30 CHAPTERS just to continue following good ol' Charlie and Miley. If thats not a compliment about your amazing writing skills then I don't know what is!

If you take any suggestions as to what to write about next, I'd love to get to know more about Brian and Stacy's relationship.

I don't usually comment, but I'de just like to say that this is easily the best completed story on this entire website. I really cared about the characters, glad to see they got a happy ending, other than Chip, poor guy. I'm sad that it's over, and just wanted to thank you for writing it in the first place.