All Comments on 'Charlie & Seth Pt. 01'

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AwkwardMDAwkwardMDover 8 years ago
Fffffffuuuuck!

So fucking hot. Charlie is such a goddamn badass.

infinitystopperinfinitystopperover 8 years ago

A conversation I've had with my partner many, many times, and good Lord did you pull it off well. I love the little touches of inexperience.

I'd definitely read more of this. Consider my interest extremely piqued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Genderswap?

Really rare concept here. Hope it will be updated

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More!

Great imagination. And so clean there's hardly anything for an editor to do. I gave it a 5 (but you'd better continue the story—grin).

Sy1varaSy1varaabout 8 years ago
Feels like I've just found my sexual orientation. Half kidding.

Oh my. That was, well, apparently more than what I coumd hope for when I went looking for rare malesub stories. The dom is not a sadist, tbe sub isn't a minless slut, it doesn't feel generic, predictable, or too unrealist… that's almost too good to be true. I wouldn't have hoped to get to read something like this. something both creatice, sweet, quite hot, relatable and romantic all at once! Well written straight femdom without humiliation or pain is so damn rare... I'm glad you wrote this. Take care!

Your_Viking_SlaveYour_Viking_Slavealmost 7 years ago
So hot! I love Charlie!

Wow, that was amazing!

Very sexy, and all the funny didn't distract one bit!

I really loved Charlie, though. That kind of assertive, sensual woman is so hot!

JasonClearwaterJasonClearwateralmost 7 years ago
Well this was awesome!

So right, on so many levels. You really are a master of this craft. *5 + awe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I need raw water

I actually stopped breathing and just jumped into the scene,no idea what part I played yet,but fuck me,my pussy is still humming. I cant wait for the next installment. Keep on keeping on mate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Charlie and Seth are trash

post bass ackwards instead

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Perfect

One of the absolute best on Literotica, would love to see a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Brilliant

I would love to read a sequel to this story.

DangerRabbitDangerRabbitover 4 years ago
Yup!

I know it's been awhile but this is one of my favorites! Would love to see a part 2

hughmachughmacalmost 3 years ago

Lots of imagination, This should be continued. The 0ptions are limitless. One of the best stories ever.

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