All Comments on 'Charlie The Angel'

Redundancy, mixture of tenses .... your grammar is so poor as to make reading your story painful. It might be a good story .... but I just can not read something so poorly crafted.

Loved it - just detailed enough to be really hot.

That's one of the sexiest stories I've ever read on here. I don't usually even think to leave comments, but I had to on this one. Wow.

GREAT Story!! This was a GREAT first write on Literotica!!!