All Comments on 'Charlie's Apartment Pt. 01'

Terrific first offering. Hope to see more of this author's work. Great job!

Really good start for your first story. I am eager to see where this goes from here.

A good story totally spoiled by him pulling out that worked up he would have push up her as far as he could and filled her pussy full of his cum?

Great story can't wait to read more

How will the camping trip go

I like that he hadn’t lost all brain cells and therefore pulled out, though he could have just asked.

Great job, five stars!

Tc

Well done but he should have cum inside of her. More erotic.

Very good story. kept me wanting more and can't wait to see where this goes.

This is one of the best written stories I’ve read on here. I loved everything about it. Please keep writing! And don’t pay attention to the people talking about where he should’ve cum - your choice was so much more realistic and a breath of fresh air from all of the cliches.

Great start!

Will Charlie share with her other twin?

YES…keep

It in the family.

I think his pulling out not only gives the story someplace to go, intimacy wise, but makes sense on it's own. Jason's entire life has gone into the blender. His relationship is over, and his job is likely over (I sure wouldn't want to go back to work with a co-worker that would do that to me!), and all he's got left is family.

Remember people, this is Pt. 01, and it needs someplace to go. If was a one off, yeah, he should have filled her to over flowing and they could have lived happily never after, or not....

Nice start to the series, keep up the good work, angel!!!

jason needed to cum inside charlie he was inside her womb he should've filled it for her

Extremely well written, great pace and the continuing back and forth prospective from both story sides were great!!!

Tasty start

Very good first part, will look forward to Part Two.