All Comments on 'Charlotte the Harlot a Brother used'

Good little story. Not every story has to be a literary masterpiece.

wish you had finished the story

Meh...not bad, not great. A bit predictable, etc.

I made a mistake and published this story in the FIRST TIME category by accident and they roasted me for it.

So I deleted it and re Published it in incest where it belongs but they transferred my low rating as well.

I'm not sure that's very fair. Is there anything I can do about it.

Thanks for hearing my beef.

Gregscott

Good sexy story! Charlotte deserves a reward, and maybe Jerry can fuck her again. If Jerry is older, please give Jerry a splash of sexy chest hair for his young man's chest -- something to really please Charlotte!

The mother's unbelievable reaction to finding out made a possible story suddenly seem like complete bullshit. Leave that out, and it would have been 200% better.