All Comments on 'Charlotte's Story Ch. 02'

I really enjoyed the buildup (with the shopping trip). Your second effort was even a little better than the first. Your lovely, humble way of writing continues to serve you well.....as well as Charlotte serves Paul. I look forward to you becoming "collared" or "owned". I know that Paul will always protect you.

Fantastic...is there more?

Please say theres more, lol

xx

I agree with the others. Almost as good as the first one... this one had just a few little mistakes.... using "she" for "me" during one of the visits while shopping... stuff like that. Not too hard to get past it though with such an excellent innocence in Charlotte's beginning. I know you'll be able to relate Charlotte's emotions with all the new experiences she is sure to have. I look forward to it.

Thank you all! Your encouragement is so welcome to this beginner. You have no idea!

And yes, there is more. I am only 2 months into what is nearly a two year relationship, so there is plenty to add. What I do when I catch up with myself I am not sure, But for now I have plenty to write about.

Kisses!

Charlotte

Don't stop now, you have me hooked.

Just LOVE your story.

Mike

It's not a Merle Normal shop but a Merle Norman Cosmetics shop.