by Ms_Bee
OK premise.
But seriously rushed.
Totally lacks interplay and material dialog during femdom activities.
Needed teasing.
Needed his reaction/s to what she was doing to him. And what she SAID (or, hould have said) to him about what she was going to do.
Needed dialog about how close he was to cumming. And that he wasn't allowed to cum without her permission.
And so much more.
Three stars.
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