by Estcher
Thank you. It is rare that I am aroused and educated by a story. Yours provided me both. I can hardly wait to meet the young couple.
Wow!
Excellent!
Erotic, arousing, fun, sexy, well-written…..
Please write more and more and more…..
But be gentle and patient….
Unless it is the right time to be rough and urgent!
The narrative kept me riveted. This writer has mastered the art of pausing the action while we listen in to the actor's inner process of thinking, considering, and deciding. That millisecond of paused time most often occurs just before a major story event, such as an orgasm. Then the action returns, erupting with a vengeance. Bravo!
This was an amazing story the build up n details . Please do more I loved this
I absolutely LOVED your story. Regrettably I am at the other end of the age scale now but I just wish I had had a tutored like you when I was 18.
It really should be a compulsory part of the curriculum!!
The key here is if you liked it and Pete liked it and no one was harmed in the process the mission accomplished. ( that a girl) and believe me every boy needs one of you to help him become a man.
God, that was hot. It brought back the memory of my becoming a "Padawan" of an older hot woman. While I had done it before in the back seat of a car and she really was a woman of the world I was her first "Boy" as an older hot and experienced woman who was doing me as a lark. She was not ready when I slid in and started hammering away and almost immediately was going to cum. She was not as gentle as your lady as she grabbed my ears and yelled, " You wait a minute you son of a bitch I am not ready yet!" It scared me so bad I almost lost my erection. Almost...but not all the way. Looking into my eyes she said now go slow and use your hips in circles. Remember, a lady not only goes but first, but also always cums first!
Lana Ocean your lessons should be taught worldwide!
Sooo delicious to journey with you as showed Petey heaven on earth!
I love your descriptions & YES as to having men more verbal!
I don't know why use ball gags, WHY would you want to miss out on those sounds of pleasure...!
Off to read your next chapter. Thank you!
Wonderful writing, so descriptive. And what a story! Such imagination. Loved it.
Absolutely awesome. Every young man should have this kind of experience in his life. Thanks for sharing.
I normally stick to sci fi… but your writing kinda blew my mind. It draws a reader in so very quickly and so well. If you write anything else at all I’d love to read it. I’m about to do my due diligence and scour the web for another of your stories. Thank you.