by _Ashley_
Chastity is one thing, but I wouldn't enjoy the dickwad attitude that permeates this place. Killed my ladywood. Nicely written, though.
Very well written and flows well! As another user pointed out, I love the mix of male and female chastity.
While I respect the comments of others, perhaps those of you who didn't like it should have stopped and moved on when you realized it wasn't your cup of tea? As opposed to insulting someone you don't even know for writing a well written, FREE story.
Your profile says you've been writing for a long time. I'd be happy to see some more stories from you.
Thank you everyone for your comments; I always appreciate them, good or bad and will listen to constructive criticism.
An update is in the works as well as two new stories, stay tuned!
"What ugly and nonsense story". This is the 3rd time in 24 hours that I have seen this same identical comment. Completely copied and pasted over and over. Why do this?? Perhaps you sir/mam are the one with the mental issues. I was enjoying the story, then it abruptly ended...Why? I am sure you will write more, but it was a bit of a let down ending.
I love the female chastity stories and we need many more but the jumping around is off putting. I would absolutely love to see you follow one person through the entire experience. Then we can see how she responds and feels as well as if she is changed at the end. thx
Chastity is a new thing for me. It needs to be followed by decadent release and punishment. mmmm.
Enjoyed this a lot. Better written than a lot of other stuff here, and a subject which rather fascinates me. The story structure is good too, as it leaves ample room for many characters with many different stories to be told, including from different perspectives.
The open ending definitely left me wanting more...
A chastity story from someone who understands the chastity fetish. It's too bad there isn't a part two. Hopefully one will come in the future but seeing as this is from 2017 I doubt we will get a continuation.
Thank you very much for posting your beautiful story 'Chastity Vacation'. It was a very erotic and enjoyable story to read. Loved all the characters and the situations. Had a girfriend who locked me in chastity for weeks sometimes. Edged throught reading your story, til the very end.
What a beautiful story, such a pity we never got to read a continuation. Too bad the author stopped after just 1 story, she had so much potential.