All Comments on 'Chat Sessions Ch. 01'

by bluknight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent start!

Not too much buildup, but enough to make it worth the wait. I can't wait for the next chapter!

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53about 13 years ago
Good beginning

A good beginning. You have laid the groundwork for some interesting twists and turns, including MFF with his mom and sis.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Can not wait for ch2

Very very good

One of the better ones

Good work

HoosierFriendHoosierFriendabout 13 years ago
Perfect!

Certainly looking forward to next installment.

imharmless69imharmless69about 13 years ago
Excellent start

Don't make us wait too long for chapter2!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a4 months ago

Good start. I appreciate character devdelopment. I like real life physical, emotional, and psychological reactions of the characters to real world situations. No monster sexual attributes, no ridiculous durational sexual activity, and no multiplitude sexual partners/prizes.

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