All Comments on 'Chattel Ch. 02'

Did you re-read this before you posted it? UGH!

I think that the story would be better if you focused on his training and why he is trapped in this situation would be more of an interesting perspective than just this is the way the world is.

Or even if you want to continue with "the world as it is" and underground movement to free the slaves.

That was nice but do some feet stuf in it to make it dirty and sweaty that be awesome!!

Very intriguing. Keep going where you want to go with it. I like the pace so far.