All Comments on 'Cheater Gets the Trophy'

by VirgoPisces

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MigbirdMigbirdalmost 2 years ago

Well written, delightfully erotic/romantic romp. Hope you continue to share your vivid imagination

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

When you switch between past tense and present tense, it makes it confusing for the reader. Please choose one tense and stick to it.

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Having always been a bookworm, in love with the written word, I decided to become a writer. Soon after, I decided to challenge myself to become a diverse writer. Everything I write is fiction/imagination it's never the same story.