All Comments on 'Cheating and Infidelity'

A super sad story & novel approach to writing it on this site. However, I found that some of the writing could've been better. There's also too much with the wife crying & apologizing; should've had more dialogue - between her & her husband, him & Sally, & the wife handing in her resignation. 3 stars Bob

Sally should have told everyone of her suspicions so the evil slut could have been ostracized by all family. She deserved more than just guilt for killing her husband. Author needs a tougher writing style, not one so wimpy.

Writer do not like comments like cuck shit… well, then work harder on dialog. The mc says suppose we get divorced? Pretty wimpy statement after a 3 yr affair. She says I am sorry about 50 times in two pages. Tell her to shut the f up, saying sorry costs the person exactly zero in effort, meaning or pain. Just sounds like a cheater that wants it all without any price after discovery. Mc here came off as indecisive, oh woe is me sort of loser, and he was by writers design, by definition a cuck. No hard reaction,, no emotions at all, so the criticism stands. Drivel.

Well hope the disgusting woman lives in agony for the rest of her live

He finds out!

3 years!

The other cheater is a serial cheater. STDs!!!!

He doesn't do much of anything.

Your welcome! Wimpy cuckold!!!

Have Jonathan crying?!

What shit is that. He cuckolds the man for 3 years caused his death!!

Piece of shit Not a man!!

cuckshit... and a wimpy ending.. maybe He could have been laid in the casket wearing panties and makeup?

I like the concept. I thought the idea was a good one. The conversation seemed a bit stilted however. I did not get the feeling that his wife’s dialogue was genuine and it seemed cliché. I would’ve liked to hear more threats from Johnathan about leaving his wife and I would’ve like to see her do something else other than just crying.

And that’s how you get away with murder lol

Nah.

I liked it, but I wanted him to live.

Wow thats BAD!!!

Women.....women........women

Sorry no positives on cuckolding. just hate it... luckily I can choose which writers work to follow....... For this one!!!! No thank you.

Umm no. She is a witch. Once a month for 3 years and kills her husband. Grotesque. Married 30 years. She is doomed to mostly empty life for her final 22 years.

I thought it was a good story. I’m glad he did not have to make a choice on his wife. No one would win!

He caught vivid and died.

The two cheaters caught covid and lived. Years affair but still claiming love

Don't believe anyone can betray another that long And have any love for them. And so as the MC didn't tell kids etc average was best I could give storyline

Why are cheaters always sooooooo sorry after they are found out. The mind bogles. Cause and effect. She committed adultery got COVID gave it to her husband and he died. It would have been better if she had given him and bad case of an STD.

I thought it was a great story, sad but quite true to form.

I liked that story, even if it is on the dark side.