All Comments on 'Cheating and Infidelity'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A super sad story & novel approach to writing it on this site. However, I found that some of the writing could've been better. There's also too much with the wife crying & apologizing; should've had more dialogue - between her & her husband, him & Sally, & the wife handing in her resignation. 3 stars Bob

kirei8kirei8almost 2 years ago

Sally should have told everyone of her suspicions so the evil slut could have been ostracized by all family. She deserved more than just guilt for killing her husband. Author needs a tougher writing style, not one so wimpy.

DrgwngDrgwngalmost 2 years ago

Writer do not like comments like cuck shit… well, then work harder on dialog. The mc says suppose we get divorced? Pretty wimpy statement after a 3 yr affair. She says I am sorry about 50 times in two pages. Tell her to shut the f up, saying sorry costs the person exactly zero in effort, meaning or pain. Just sounds like a cheater that wants it all without any price after discovery. Mc here came off as indecisive, oh woe is me sort of loser, and he was by writers design, by definition a cuck. No hard reaction,, no emotions at all, so the criticism stands. Drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well hope the disgusting woman lives in agony for the rest of her live

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He finds out!

3 years!

The other cheater is a serial cheater. STDs!!!!

He doesn't do much of anything.

Your welcome! Wimpy cuckold!!!

Have Jonathan crying?!

What shit is that. He cuckolds the man for 3 years caused his death!!

Piece of shit Not a man!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

cuckshit... and a wimpy ending.. maybe He could have been laid in the casket wearing panties and makeup?

NicealloverNicealloverover 1 year ago

I like the concept. I thought the idea was a good one. The conversation seemed a bit stilted however. I did not get the feeling that his wife’s dialogue was genuine and it seemed cliché. I would’ve liked to hear more threats from Johnathan about leaving his wife and I would’ve like to see her do something else other than just crying.

skruff101skruff101over 1 year ago

And that’s how you get away with murder lol

bobareenobobareenoabout 1 year ago

I liked it, but I wanted him to live.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Wow thats BAD!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Women.....women........women

ProfWernerProfWerner8 months ago

Sorry no positives on cuckolding. just hate it... luckily I can choose which writers work to follow....... For this one!!!! No thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Umm no. She is a witch. Once a month for 3 years and kills her husband. Grotesque. Married 30 years. She is doomed to mostly empty life for her final 22 years.

Phatom10Phatom107 months ago

I thought it was a good story. I’m glad he did not have to make a choice on his wife. No one would win!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

He caught vivid and died.

The two cheaters caught covid and lived. Years affair but still claiming love

Don't believe anyone can betray another that long And have any love for them. And so as the MC didn't tell kids etc average was best I could give storyline

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Why are cheaters always sooooooo sorry after they are found out. The mind bogles. Cause and effect. She committed adultery got COVID gave it to her husband and he died. It would have been better if she had given him and bad case of an STD.

TommywinklesTommywinkles5 months ago

I thought it was a great story, sad but quite true to form.

ProfesseurXProfesseurX5 months ago

I liked that story, even if it is on the dark side.

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