All Comments on 'Cheating Asshat Bastard'

by jasliz

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2hot2m82hot2m8almost 13 years ago
Sweet Release

Hot how she milked that cock dry! Sweet! Makes Me Throb and Ooze!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Bravo! Bravo!

Beautiful fantasy, deliciously written. Hooray for anal!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Really?

I'm thinking any married man kicks her out, naked if necessary. Not enough of a back story about his married life to make his behavior believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wasted assfuck

The last thing I'd do when fucking a woman in the ass is to pull out and shoot on her back or wherever.

Likewise if I'm fucking her mouth.

Same if I'm fucking her pussy.

If I'm fucking her, I come inside her, and so do most men.

Some of these writers think they should translate video porn (where "evidence" of coming "needs" to be shown) to the written word.

Makes for a loser story, probably by someone who has never fucked a woman in the butt, perhaps never even fucked anyone. Men don't waste their orgasms this way, regardless of video porn. 0 stars if possible for this alone.

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General_OGeneral_Oover 6 years ago
Wonderful

Please write more great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot story, I quite enjoyed it. Reminds me of my infidelity with an ex-coworker. Yes I too am a piece of shit lol. But never had I been so tempted with a big booty woman who asked me for anal. It’s long over with now but I’d probably do it again if the temptation returned.

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.