All Comments on 'Cheating Wife'

A good story but poor grammar and spelling is a distraction. Perhaps running through a word processing app would help.

Sounds like it could be a GREAT story. I only read the first few lines I couldn't get past all of the spelling and grammar mistakes. A spell checker or a word processing app would take care of all of it.

You wrote, “ It was delicious Lee knotty ”. Perhaps you mean “It was deliciously naughty “. After this I could not take this offering seriously.

It reads as if you’re using a dictation to typing app, if so please spell check it before posting, the spelling and grammar mistakes ruined this. Plus, this is in the anal category, of which there was very little and what there was did not work well. Keep writing, but fix your mistakes!

Learn to spell - learn to proof read and correct the spelling and grammatical errors - you then might make a half passable author

It might have been a good story if you would have had a proofreader. Try fixing the mistakes and resubmit it.

'Delicious Lee Knotty' sounds like someone's name. It's actually a pretty fucking great name, too bad it's not what you meant and it had me laughing so hard that I had to stop to make this comment. I'm not finishing this story...it's awful in it's current form, so fix it and try again.

The idea was good, but I’m afraid everything else was pretty much terrible. If this had been the first rough draft before writing the story, maybe it would have been OK, but there are a lot of steps to writing, and you missed out most of them. Take your draft, and split it into logical paragraphs so it flows, and different ideas and speakers are separated. Then, help yourself by putting it into Google Docs or Word to grammar and spell check. Then read through yourself before getting an editor to do the same. Republish. Don’t give up, but learn to do it better.

Hard to read with the misspelled words

so many wrong words, this is too difficult to read.

Illiteracy is curable.

Potential to be a decent story, totally ruined by awful grammar and punctuation.

difficult to read or follow

This was plagiarized. The grammer is so bad because it was created by an voice to text translation. I actually heard it first on a podcast

as usual,writer has ended,abruptlythere is no doubt writer has more to add,let writer get it on

Shutters are for windows....

Enjoyed the story but use of the English language was atrocious. You could use a proofreader. 5 stars for the story.