All Comments on 'Cheating Wife's Revenge'

What next.....

Where's the rest of it????

Hopefully we do not have to wait to long for the next part. This one was well written and definitely begs a part 2

First, get an editor.

And pick a verb tense, and stay with it.

Most of all: this story is hideously unfinished. And the story as presented has no apparent relationship to the title.

If your going to make multiple chapters, say so. DONT just stop a story in the middle as it makes no sense. Rated low because of your lack of an ending.

I couldn't agree more with LoneStarRider.

1* if only we could have minus scores.

... because he'll pull this story, like he pulled his other ones.

You won't like us if you do....bill

No ending, not good in this section little buddy!

Look youve got to give us an Intro so we know what's going on in the upcoming story and chapters and stuff like that. It will reduce negative feed back by 99%. It's that other 1% that's the killer LOL

...for the other shoe to drop, the husband's shoe....hope he burns the bitch!

gave u a 5 for a good setup.

is there anything she has to worry about, TK U MLJ LV NV

1. How can a cheating wife get revenge? If she is the cheater against whom would she get revenge?

2. The story has nothing to do with title.

3. She takes condoms and personal lubricant to visit her old friends?

4. I could go one but it would be a waste of time, just like the story.

You're constantly mixing past tense with present. It's really takes away from the story and is disconcerting.

Let me guess, she gets pulled over by the cop, License and Registration please, She takes off after being let go, the cop realizes he still has her drivers license,etc. contacts the husband.. or So she gets home only to find the house having a for sale sign on the front lawn? glossy pictures of her in an envelope on the kitchen table from the previous night? All Her clothes on the front lawn ? Husband's car still at home ? A man with a packet of Divorce papers waiting for her on the front steps? Husband hired a P.I. to follow her and because of the messages, he intercepted the one from her boyfriend. She Cuckolded her Husband. She's about to get the ax.

This was just a step by boring step review of the cheaters day, so what. There is no mystery, no suspense, no action and no plot. I thought this was about a cheating wife that gets caught but so far absolutely nothing has happened. That little bit thrown in at the end to create suspense did not work it did nothing for the story. It was to little to late. I gave this a rating of "1" because it fell flat and never recovered.

Chapter 2 is a different story altogether ....what a waste of effort. One star.

So what the fuck happened? (Your Ch 2 had nothing to do with this drawn out camel shit!)

Did she get caught?Did Mushroom Mike's wife slice it off to make an omlette?

I feel like I just wasted my time reading this shit!

doesn't always stay hidden. TK U MLJ LV NV

This author was an idiot. He must be dead since he talks about being sexually active in the 1940's which is 67 to 76 years ago. Also he hasn't been active in his bio since 2006. I think he purposely wrote incomplete stories just to piss us off, lol!

Ending?

Sorry Tpaman 1132 but will not read any more of your garbage

The title makes is sound like it's the wife getting revenge. Confusing story with no real ending.

Bad tag line and definitely not finished!

Where is the rest of the story. What a waste of time reading this garbage.

This is garbage. Stinky garbage.

You should be fined and forbidden to submit more junk.

No revenge

To finish the story. The title is misleading. This was cheating wife's affair.

For all the sex described this story was not very sexy or interesting. 🤥

Poorly written, no revenge, I could go on but,you as writer need to look at this sad story again.

What revenge?

If this what the Author of this story thinks end a good ending...he or she has a poor mind stinks at writing stories....I who am reading this want to see the bitch get caught an pay the price...so add a chapter 2 and do your job...

What hell is this there is no revenge there is nothing but poorly written sex scenes

I smell the stench already. outta here!

What the hell did the title mean? How was this cheating wife getting revenge? The story was way better than most, as it avoided all the usual memes and stereotypes, but what's up with the title?

I started the story because of the word “revenge” in the title, but there was nothing even vaguely resembling revenge in it, so I feel rather deceived and cheated by that. Also, there is too much extraneous detail that obscured the plot at times. You could have written this story in only two pages instead of three.

Hey.... who stole the last page? What a stupid way to end a story! It's like the scary movie when they are walking into the abandoned house... the tension-filled music is screaming... there's something hiding in the shadows...they aren't looking behind them and... The End. WTF?

Just a very bad story. Avoid this at all costs.

FTDS

I don't like your story.From the weak pease of shit cuck husbands view.He know what going on,to abliviouse an not notice make you a trusting dumb ass.she tuned out to be deceptive skeamer and control freak.Your wife has been giving not sloppy seconds but resonance of it for God knows how long.This is the ultimate disrespect.I'm so piss off with this story and many others like me.take this story an make a 2 partner out of it (Cheating Wife's Revenge Pt.2)the consequences,payback your husband fucking you lovers wife in his house for a change.As for the conservative lovers wife get with the fucking program here.she needs to get her nerves and ego kicked hard.The dumb conservative wife should be given advice (know your enemy or enemies).get info and seek&destroy,wreck havoc.Give the 2 cheaters night&day mare's.Now if you'll excuse me I need to take my meds.I misspelled a lot of words,no rating on this story bye.

Another story same cliche. I love my spouse just sex but does have piece of my heart. Not taking anything away from spouse. Except things can't take back or replace. Time especially

WTF was this ? Far too many details about screwing over the husband, and nothing like a discovery or confrontation. Seems more like a bragging disclosure by the writer.

You need an editor! Waaaaaay too many exclamation points! Their overuse completely detracts from their effectiveness! It also makes reading your story annoying!

I think that long descriptions of normal people having normal good sex are really boring.