All Comments on 'Checkmate'

Being schooled by an older man is great, so long as they are caring and loving. Steve sounds like an ideal teacher.

A beautiful coming of age Story.

A tender story for us older men who wonder what's out there after 50 and alone. Your talents of story telling are good - you create a beautiful mental picture and describe feelings and emotions in a realistic way. I wish you would do as thorough of a job during the scenes of passion. You seem to rush through them sometimes. Enjoy the moment. I really enjoy reading your stories

A very good read

Great story, very romantic and... sensual, if I can put it this way. I enjoyed it very much

tw this one has all of your strengths; the themes you write best, characters that are familiar enough to be comforting but not enough to be repetitive, and a gentle tone that is not exploitative. Well done sir, I salute you upstairs and down :)