All Comments on 'Checkmate'

I thought this was a great prompt for a story but yeah it was so short. Would’ve loved more story, more detail, more fucking

Nah.

Need to create a richer story arc

Would be really good to develop how the situation came about. The dialogue between the two women leading up to it. How did she know about the strap on, how did it come into the conversation? How did they come to agree that the strap on will be used on the loser? By the time they have agreed to play with that outcome it has already become sexual, and that is all skipped over. Would be fun to explore.