All Comments on 'Checkout Lane Hookup Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love the story

Excellent well written story. Love the characters and the action. I would definitely like to see where your imagination takes the two or more of them! This is one story I will be checking back with in hopes of more. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
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Good story, a little too wordy. Keep the individual thoughts , but get to the point a little bit faster, bc I got distracted.

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