All Comments on 'Cheerleader in the Darkroom'

Loved the story. Very well written!!!!!

GREAT !!

Don’t be a ‘one hit wonder’…. Write a whole album !!!

Thanks,

Tob

Bravo! Wunderbar! Muy bien.

That was hot as hot can be! I love stories about girls with pubic hair. It's such a turn on. I jerked off twice reading. I'm gonna go for a third time. Please write more.

Shame this is your only story on here. Dang hot.

Left me with a warm fuzzy feeling and a smile on my face. Thank you!

Worth reading several more times

Super well written, engaging, and not as predictable as I thought. The ending was cutesy but with the right amount of dirty. Shanks :)

I do like stories of young couples where the girl takes the lead. I just wish that I'd had the confidence to do it when I was her age. Envy. Envy. ('David's First Time' by Claudia Bones also had a similarly sexually forward young lady.)

But Story_Teller, you now have them married, presumably as each others' first and only when it comes to sexual experiences. In these days when seeking variety is the norm, should they now consider wandering? How will they know what they've missed out on if they go to their graves never having tried another sexual partner?

Give it a try, Story_Teller. A follow-up story could be interesting.

Lue

Ps: Story_Teller, I do note that your biographical note is rather uninformative. I find that it helps to know a little more about the author when reading their stories. With such a sweet story as yours, that could be nice.

Pps: It's poor form to put your own story in your favourites list.

Write more like this

As you seem to be unaware of the fact, I have to tell you that since the discovery of how to make female hormones in pill form, many young teenage girls, about 30-40% or more have really painful and/or irregular periods, so the advent of the hormone pills was a boon for them, as they could get relief and not have to be "off sick" so often. No doubt some exaggerated their problem so as to convince the parents and Doctor to give them the hormones so they could have sex without risk of pregnancy, but for the most part, many took them for a genuine problem so their lives were transformed. And as the Dr would have had to examine her vaginally as part of the investigation to find the cause of the problem, the speculum would have ruptured her hymen, and hence no pain or bleeding with first intercourse. So please don't mock these girls being on the pill statement, a large number of girls would have been on it for valid reasons!

These stories are always full of virgin girls who for some extraneous reason just happen to be on the pill when the "main event" happens.

i really love this one. very good!! continue...

You give the other weird kids like me some hope ;) well, my school time is over and no school beauty did that with me, but anyway... you never know. And I am so thankful that for once, they can stay together for some time!

of an incident with my girlfriend during my senior year of high school in May of 1970

Don't leave us this way!

Tri, I could imagine it too, but it was pitch black! Lol

Nice tease of a story, keep it up, look for an editor to assist you a little, some of the sentence structures were a bit muddled.

I could picture the two together in that dark room. Another chapter, please. Maybe you could continue this story, this time using first-person Stacy's point of view.

Keep up the good work !!

just finish the story please

YOU TEASE!!!! Outstanding work, I can't wait to hear how this turns out!

???? Really ????

Finish this please!

You get us worked up and then you disappear in a cloud of smoke...

Would love to read more