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Needs work

This got me soooo wet.

I think that your timeline for the male lead's SEAL career is a bit ... optimistic. The training pipeline is at least 31 months, and if the main character entered the Navy at age 17, he most likely would have become a seal at about 20, followed by his service. Even a cursory wikipedia search would find that, so I should think that a little more research next time would help the realism of your work. Have a nice day!

At the beginning he states she is 18. But just before he fucks her he says "if you haven't been penetrated this will hurt a bit" Then she says " I broke my Hymen back when a year ago when I was out horse riding when I was 16" !!!!!! That would make her only 17 now ????? And coupled with that hoary old myth that horse or bicycle riding and gymnastics, athletics and/or ballet and other kinds of dancing ruptures virgin's hymens, and any sense of remaining reality goes right out the window. And plunging a 9 inch long cock (it would have to be 2.5 or 3 inches thick!!!) into a non penetrated Virgin Cunt in one thrust for the first time would definitely cause a bit of tearing, pain and bleeding at her cunt entrance even if she had a ruptured or congenitally absent hymen. So please keep your timeline, ages and facts a bit more accurate please in the cause of a good story, thanks (Ralph S)

A Navy Seal taking a girl's virginity....hopefully to be continued.