by xnpd
This chapter moved slowly. Very little actual interaction between Amir and Jamie and the flinching and pulling his arm away probably took a few steps backward. I hope this isn’t a frustratingly slow story that takes a looong time to build into anything, setting up obstacles as it goes such that these two realizing their feelings for each other cause more collateral damage than it does good. Looking forward to more. Thanks.
Great build up and tension in Amir, that seems so real. Can't wait for chapter 3
Building up and hopefully some real physical sexual contact soon! Like the lustful descriptions...