All Comments on 'Chemistry Pt. 06'

Damn, this story is so psychedelic. I'm not sure I like it, but I can't stop reading! Holding my breath for the next one

Has maybe jumped the shark? I understand the allure of an unreliable narrator, but after 6 chapters, I have no F-g idea what is going on. And am losing my desire to know.

I don’t know what to make of this series. It seems as if Amir has descended into schizophrenia (loss of time, breaks with reality, paranoia, etc.). And that’s really sad to watch (i.e., not hot at all). I do hope that we find out that this is all just a really f’d up dream.

What little bit of erotica is buried in this story is overshadowed by the psychosis. NOT sexy!!!!

I agree with others - this story seems like a college student’s descent into mental illness which is the furthest thing from hot. I hope there is an explanation for all of this, but I’m losing interest in finding out.

Got to be honest, this series is on the confusing side. However, you are a very skilled writer, so I'll keep reading to see where things go with Amir and Jamie (and now Carl?)...

Interesting mix of gay and horror genres. I can't wait for the next chapter

I’m really quite confused as to what is going on, or as to what type of story this is. It alternates between horror/thriller and erotica in wild bounds, and I’m having trouble trying to keep up.

Been really drawn in by this story up until this chapter. Now it appears Amir is having a mental breakdown or been given drugs and it is losing its appeal to me. Sorry....