All Comments on 'Cherries will Never Taste the Same'

Hot. Hope you continue this story. Was a little hard to follow who was who at times. But still enjoyable.

SB

What a wonderful sweet first effort. I loved it. I hope you have more stories coming.

I'm not really a fan of present tense stories but this was short enough and well-enough written to keep my interest. You're certainly showing that you've got the right stuff---keep up this standard and it shouldn't be too long before you gather a decent fan-base on this site. It's five stars from me.

Thank you so much for this work.

I really loved your ladies, Sunshine and Cherry. Both of them were so sexy and so real, so warm and loving. They found bliss, something we all look for and rarely achieve.

But they were also ships passing in the night, never to meet again. Sad...

I know how hard it is to write, especially when you write in an unusual style. Communicating, keeping your characters separate and distinct is difficult even when using conventional writing forms, but when you use such an interesting method, it gets complicated.

I would say that you did a very good job of doing so.

There is, unfortunately, no way to reply to comments but I just wanted to thank all who have read, liked and posted a comment until now. This is the first time I've ever posted one of my many stories online and it was more than a little nerve-wracking. But these comments have honestly made me so incredibly happy and was just what I needed after a pretty shitty day!

To anonymous - I understand about keeping track, to be honest, I often made mistakes while I was actually writing it (you might still spot a few of them in fact!). But I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for finishing the story despite that!

@Candy_Kane54 - I do have more ideas but I'm working on so many different ones all at once I don't want to make any promises. All I can promise is that I will try to make it as soon as possible and I hope you enjoy the next just as much as this one!

@Maonaigh I don't really have a response to this except...Holy Wow! I was just hoping for a few likes on something that honestly started as a writing exercise when I hit a roadblock on another project. So the words fanbase had literally never occurred to me! I'm also not a fan of present tense stories, for the most part, it's not often I find one where the writer has managed to keep it consistent. Then a friend asked me if I thought I could do a 'live-action narration' and things kind of happened from there lol. The perfectionist in me thanks you though!

@gnome_man - The you/her style originally started because I couldn't decide what to name my ladies (or they refused to tell me their names is more accurate) but once I got into the flow of it I kind of fell in love with the almost RP style that the story took. And you nailed my overall idea right on the head - one night of bliss and nothing but a memory to smile about decades later. It was difficult to keep the POVs consistent but it certainly helped that both these ladies have very distinct personalities in my head. Feeling like you know everything about your characters always makes it easier! Thank you so much for recognising the effort and for saying you think I did it well. It honestly means so very much!!

and you did it really, really well.

The story is great, the writing is great, the title is great ...

Just ... Wow!

I gave you 5 stars for a very well written first effort. Keep up the good work. I'll make sure to read your new story.

I honestly feel if I were to write about how much I liked this it would be to wordy and I would be rambling. So I will simply say this was wonderful I loved it and please please write more. Thank you for sharing and I will most certainly be looking forward to any further work.