All Comments on 'Cherry on Top Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely a slow burn, but I like the way you’re building the tension and getting us invested in the story and the characters.

Eagerly awaiting the next part

Insemin8Insemin8over 1 year ago

Slow to heat, but getting there.

As an aside, howcome the chapters are not linked? Having to go back to your story list to get the next chapter breaks up the mood.

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