All Comments on 'Cheryl and Meryl Pt. 02'

by kathrynmburke

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Damian35711 almost 4 years ago

Looking forward to other chapters

This piece is nicely paced.

ScottishTexan over 2 years ago

Nope...I'm done. Two wrongs do not make a right.

I was really loving Cheryl right up until she decided to turn her dad into a cuckold with her boyfriend. I should have expected something like this. Part of the reason I almost gave you a 4 on part 1 was because it was kind of ludicrous that she brought her boyfriend home for Christmas and the parents didn't have any objections to letting them share her bed. You get a 1/5 here and I'm not wasting my time with the remainder of this story.

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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