All Comments on 'Chicks Just Get In the Way'

You write a very likable, very sympathetic character in Will. Who hasn't felt the intensity of the pain of unrequited passion? You captured that edgy love/hate perfectly. I like how Will discovered his own power in the end. As always, Carson, you've done an outstanding job. Kudos.

Wonderful. i don't really have words to describe it.. but justice was served, and it was tasty, sweet justice. Hee hee.

Rather keen on seeing a little continuation of Will & Patrick... heeeeee

This one reads pretty smooth to me, with believable characters.

You know I love it when dirty little whores like Austin get what's coming to them. Bravo, darling. -S.

Another winner, lush and lyrical and something to learn from. I'm really gonna have to find somewhere to read this stuff that isn't the living room...

Oh Carson, you do know how to make a person sweat don't you? I await your next story with keen anticipation!

"Even through the denim I can taste his salty excitement." Where you find your words, I will never know. That's one of the tastiest things I've read in a long time. Love the story, babe. Thanks for trying to help.

You are by far the best erotic author I have ever Cum across! Again and again your stories hit the mark and strike right to the core of gay erotica. Your descriptions, characters and plots are at a level of modern novelists. In fact you might even want to take a swing at it, I would buy one.

Truly amazing, Carson--both touching and hot. The character of Will is truly human, and one to whom we can all relate. Not to mention that the sex is fabulous!

Very, very good! Absolutely wonderful scenes, and I love the turning of tables...

When has revenge ever been so sweet? I've loved this story from a baby little draft, and I love even more now that it's of age ;)

Anger and sex, what a truly heady combination. I compliment your bravo writing and the great way you captured all of the emotions of unrequited need and desire. May we all get the comeuppence of those who have fucked us over. Top rate. Thank you for the incredible read.

prompted my boyfried and i to have tons of sex... he's my little fuckbunny... i want an austin... and a will.... you're the most talented writer on this site... you could get your work publishe...keep it up..

Damn! Revenge as a dish served cold? Screw THAT! I like it HOT, Baby. :D This story was a trial, to see if I'd like reading your stuff I'm gonna read more of your stories now.

started out with rightful revenge but ended as a steamy sex session......keep writing!

In one scene, you gave us incredibly hot sex and hooked us on a character. Very nice! I really wanna go up to the bedroom with Will & Patrick now...guess I'll have to indulge my imagination a bit ;).

cocks throbbin and heads bobbin

my prick is so hard reading this

was so hard ..splash

my panties are so wet

"My own cock throbs and oozes "

as my panties fill with cum

my mate bob wanked himself over my hard cock as iwas reading this to him now he is going to lick it off then i will fuck his ass

I loved your story :) thank you so much. Hope you write a sequel, love to read about Austin being so jealous and begging for attention ;)

Um. Female reader here, happier than she's ever been.

This story was hot. Loved it. The vagisil moment- fucking hilarious!!!

Story was Hot Hot Hot. Loved the charcters especially Patrick. Loving the pale skin and freckles. Can u do a continuation please? Soooo hot it deserves another. Brilliant writing.

Nor can they hold onto their Men!

Loved this - sexy and SO hot and so well written.

HOT!! Yup, definitely hot stuff while maintaining the whole evil feel to it. Good Job!!

Yeah - This one left me laughing out loud. Absolutely awesome. Truly terribly fantastic. I loved it.

Austin sure deserved it!!

So many times I've read gay male stories on this site and the 'weaker' or more submissive male of the story lets life happen to him. Its nice to see one take back his life instead of pining away for the asshole of the story. Good job and keep up the good work. I'm gonna read more of your work hoping for more!

This story was fucking AWESOME!

Revenge can be sweet! Great read!

Loved it!

in real life ive never used a rubber.? and i aint dead.? and i am negative.? never had a dose.? so your last statement is bollox.

God, I loved this story. Been in Will's place, jerked over by a scummy "friend" who didn't give me what I needed and laughed at me. Revenge is sooooo sweet.

Second- db, you're an ass. Incredibly stupid... or very lucky. AIDS is all too real, and considering all the college gay boys coming to this site for their entertainment, the need to educate as well is something we shouldn't pass up. Yes, for God's sake, use a condom.

But she is currentky passed out on the floor.......big smile and drool everywhere .....

life has a wonderful wheel attached to it, the wheel finally turned and bit the selfish Austin on his own ass.

glad Will and Patrick found rach other.

loved your story

cp

I love this story and the writer is very good. I haven't sucked a cock or been fucked yet but I would try it after reading this story. starfan3880@yahoo.com--Indiana.

i love the narrative in Will's head. so much eeply hot and sexy revenge. very very good.

This is a wonderful story by the greatest Author. I spurted twice while reading it and wished I could sleep with Carson just once.

That was hot how he took control and walked away be a hot 2nd story what Austin does and the girl she has to walk out,what does Patrick say to Will afterwards

This room just got really hot. Not to mention Austin getting exactly what he deserves. *phew* it's really hot in here....brb

TM

brilliant!

Okay, so there's only a little dialogue. Not a problem.

Your narration of the protagonist's thoughts and emotions is superb. You captured and conveyed a lovely range of feelings.

Oh, and the sex descriptions were woven seamlessly into the scene.

Effing brilliant.

This story is amazing. I love it!!! Omg! Completely different from all the other stories I've read. Wow! I'm trying to find words to describe it. I agree with the other comment that says Effing Brilliant!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!

It seems that neither Austin or Will really cared for each other much at all! Two very insecure, confused X-best friends that really hurt each other!!! I get that Will needed desperately to break free, and take the power back! But in the end is he any better than Austin after what he did?

Revenge can feel sweet for a time! This story captured so many emotions, mostly negative! I know Austin was a complete asshole, cock tease, and he really hurt Will. But I felt real sorry for him after Will destroyed him at the end.

I loved Patrick he was so innocent and fresh. He would probably be wise to run for the hills, before these toxic friends get a chance to hurt him! In the end two best friends just destroyed each other to get there rocks off. I see some real regrets for all involved after all the drugs wear off!!! As hot as the the group sex was, it left me feeling sad and empty in the end!

Good for Will.....I know some feel sorry for Austin....Now Will, and Patrick can get to know each other better...loved the story

That was kinda jacked up😒

Wonderful

Big fan of the karma in this story!!! Well written and a great story. I really like that it’s a short story, and it’s all taking place in same location over a few hours. You’re good at making the introduction to the characters short and precise without making it shallow. In very few lines we got a good image of a gay guy being emotionally abused by his supposedly best friend. We felt the dynamic between them, and how it suddenly and very quickly changed during this experience. The well described “inner workings” of Will made me felt the rise and the empowerment so clearly when Will finally found himself in control of his abuser.

Such a seemingly simple piece, with a lot of talented writing and storytelling. 👌🏼