All Comments on 'Chloe and Allen Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
stunning

Wonderful, it's so full of tension, you got the point, you are doing very well

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 4 years ago
BEAUTIFUL

I agree with anonymous, but also the humour. Brill.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

I've been reading since the beginning and you are doing a amazing job with the excitement and tension I didn't realize I enjoyed pee play but the way you put it into the story made it extremely sexy... I also think you nailed the drunk girl talk to a capital T and made it extremely sexy and humorous and I love the nick name daddy love I stayed wet and pulsing the whole story through and can't wait for the next story I hope they get even more hands on and that the nick name and cut catch phrases stays but that also their first time together isn't with Amanda staying the night thanks for the good orgasms keep them coming please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Come on!

It's been ten days since you posted this last wonderful chapter. Come on my friend, stop torturing us! You already said you'd completed Chapter 9.

Pretty please... :-)

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23-Aug-17: I just submitted Ch 10 to be published. I can't apoligize enough for the ridiculously long wait. I never intended to do that to all the readers of this story. I won't make excuses. Life just got in the way. (I'm nervous people will be mad and show it in ratings no m...

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