All Comments on 'Chloe Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful

Thank You for sharing.

Liked the balance between mystery plot, erotic and sex scenes.

If there is anything to improve on, the narrative could be a bit less sequential in tone.

MasterKGrayMasterKGrayover 3 years agoAuthor

Anonymous,

Thank you for your kind comment, I am always looking to improve. Thank you for reading.

greens444greens444over 3 years ago
Nice storyline

I agree that the balance of story progression and sex is very nice in this chapter

raven_rose_auraven_rose_aualmost 3 years ago

Taken to the next level!!!

Sheesh again i feel sad ~ the wrong guy lost

raven_rose_auraven_rose_aualmost 3 years ago

Another twist ...i felt for sure Ben would be back on the scene with this buyer... alas its not to be!

That gurl is insatiable!

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