by Bodington
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There is no doubt that the feedback dated 12/19/12 by Mr/Ms Anonymous is cryptic. I wonder if Mr/Ms Anonymous would care to elaborate?
You've set the bar high on your first offering!
I try to read an author's first posted story upon finding them on Literotica. I must say this story has all the hallmarks of being a captivatingly epic tale. It is truly well thought out and written with great characterization, background, angst and a sensitive treatment of an innocent's entry into womanhood. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.