All Comments on 'Chloe's Shame'

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minxy69minxy69over 17 years ago
Always a pleasure!

It's always a pleasure to read your work, especially when it makes me sqirm about in my seat!!

And this one does just that!

Mr_Mrs_AngelMr_Mrs_Angelover 17 years ago
superb

The thing I love about your stories is the way you get across what the characters are thinking in the stories. Their thoughts to me add more to an erotic story than the actions.Its easy to imagine what they are doing, the thought part really adds to the emotional side of the story.Thx

BabyBlue2005BabyBlue2005over 17 years ago
A Fine Piece

Well written and well hot.

lovemonsterlovemonsterover 17 years ago
Superb

Another masterpiece. Buttons well and truly pushed with this magnificent story. You make me wanna......;)

Superb.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Twist!

MMMMMMM!!! What a fine and fitting twist... and I'm not just talking about the panties twisted between my legs at the moment... *grin* Wonderfully written, as usual... this, sir, was quite, quite hot. I'd ask you to write some more, but wouldn't dare presume... *smile*

joeys-gamejoeys-gamealmost 17 years ago
oh man

that was one hot story especially knowing what i know..

*groan*

curiousirishcuriousirishover 15 years ago
Wow

That is just fabulous ......right up my street, I do love the way you write.

sweet_lusciousdesiresweet_lusciousdesireover 12 years ago
exciting

To be so much under someone's control is extremely arousing. You're a hot, sexy and talented writer.

InnocentAuraInnocentAuraover 12 years ago

I got pulled in from the beginning. Everything was vivid, and very claustrophobic at times; I caught myself holding my breath a lot from the images inside my head.

Honestly though, what really did it for me was the ending. Totally did not see it coming. Kudos on that!

eWomaneWomanalmost 11 years ago
A bit...

on the harsh side, but still a good read. A surprise ending makes it worth the time. Reads quick due to skillful writing. Thanks --

unicorn64unicorn64almost 11 years ago

If this was her first lesson she needs to get out now. It was a good read but he was quite harsh. If that had happened in this town the police would arrest someone for indecent exposure. I thought BDSM was supposed to be mutual and legal. No one is supposed to be hurt.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Nice role reversal of the Lady Brigadier or is it Colonel to her

Subordinate : this sort of scenario is already hapenin' with the glass walls shatterin' & talented but masochistic , intelligent women achieving important , powerful positions thnx to Women's Lib ! Thnx for writin' 'n sharin' this :5-ed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Delightful

intense & engaging

Ending with the potential for a cracking good series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Ah, a fabulous combination...

I love the way you cut the description of action with the insights on how the character feels; the excitement, humiliation, doubt, uncertainty. Really enjoyable. Could be quite addictive, this.

Um, and very hot and filthy too.

So enjoyable. Thank you.

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