by geronimo_appleby
It's always a pleasure to read your work, especially when it makes me sqirm about in my seat!!
And this one does just that!
The thing I love about your stories is the way you get across what the characters are thinking in the stories. Their thoughts to me add more to an erotic story than the actions.Its easy to imagine what they are doing, the thought part really adds to the emotional side of the story.Thx
Another masterpiece. Buttons well and truly pushed with this magnificent story. You make me wanna......;)
Superb.
MMMMMMM!!! What a fine and fitting twist... and I'm not just talking about the panties twisted between my legs at the moment... *grin* Wonderfully written, as usual... this, sir, was quite, quite hot. I'd ask you to write some more, but wouldn't dare presume... *smile*
That is just fabulous ......right up my street, I do love the way you write.
To be so much under someone's control is extremely arousing. You're a hot, sexy and talented writer.
I got pulled in from the beginning. Everything was vivid, and very claustrophobic at times; I caught myself holding my breath a lot from the images inside my head.
Honestly though, what really did it for me was the ending. Totally did not see it coming. Kudos on that!
on the harsh side, but still a good read. A surprise ending makes it worth the time. Reads quick due to skillful writing. Thanks --
If this was her first lesson she needs to get out now. It was a good read but he was quite harsh. If that had happened in this town the police would arrest someone for indecent exposure. I thought BDSM was supposed to be mutual and legal. No one is supposed to be hurt.
Subordinate : this sort of scenario is already hapenin' with the glass walls shatterin' & talented but masochistic , intelligent women achieving important , powerful positions thnx to Women's Lib ! Thnx for writin' 'n sharin' this :5-ed.
intense & engaging
Ending with the potential for a cracking good series
I love the way you cut the description of action with the insights on how the character feels; the excitement, humiliation, doubt, uncertainty. Really enjoyable. Could be quite addictive, this.
Um, and very hot and filthy too.
So enjoyable. Thank you.