All Comments on 'Chocolate'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
depth

wow. this had depth and erotica. very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I just wanted to say that it's a wonder this story hasn't been commented on more. Because it's so rare for an erotic story to make one feel so very... lonely, I guess. What a wonderful downer ending.

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