All Comments on 'Chocolates for a Scorpion Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great!!!

Keep it up!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Another great chapter!

I don't know about all the buttplay with Prowl, that's not my thing, but otherwise it was awesome! I wonder what kinky adventures those four are going to get in next?

And please, fill us in on the sexy happenings that are only mentioned, but not actually shown in this chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Not my fave but still good...

I did not like chapter 2 as much as 1. I am hoping Prowl and Scorpion get together as you had a pretty good romance going. It also sounds like Honey and Weaver may link up, giving those two a nice "consolation prize" for missing out on Prowl. Bring on Chapter 3 :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue

Please continue writing this amazing story. It is truelly a work of art ;3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Errm

Well, i really felt torn over this chapter. The Last chapter was solid, devilishly hot, romantic, the whole thing. But i had mixed feelings about this one. Especially with Scarlet Stings night out? I dunno, i guess they are perfect for each other since they both slept with other people....but still love was not on the table this chapter.

cittrancittranabout 10 years ago
This chapter was less about love...

And more about the mutual 'aha' moment they had.

The 'aha' being "Oh. I Guess it really WASN'T 'just' a fuck."

gowkaiser96gowkaiser96almost 10 years ago
Good stuff.

I am very glad I stumbled across these two stories, right as I was thinking about this sort of thing. Sexy Supervillains is a surprisingly hard subject matter so search for on purpose.

Keep up the great work whenever you have the time and ideas for it. I do hope Prowl and Scarlet hook up properly, but, you know, I'm here for shallow reasons. So this chapter is fine.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Lesbian encounter with Galatea?

Fantastic! Will we ever see the lesbian encounter between Scorpion and Galatea?

Great series! I love it.

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaover 8 years ago
Yes

Good job, well written

Would love to experience this

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