All Comments on 'Choices Pt. 01: The Clinic'

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scttr62scttr62over 4 years ago

Very good start to a story

MasterBob67MasterBob67over 4 years ago
Very good

The characters seem right for the situation. Interested in the rest of the story

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Well written, as always. This was a really good start, and a nice build up to part two. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

TheDokTheDokalmost 2 years ago

Thank you for sharing. I hesitate to make any other comment to an author who writes better than I do.

5*

silentsoundsilentsoundover 1 year ago

This is really fun and good writing!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good introduction - very well written. Waiting for next chapters

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