All Comments on 'Choices Pt. 02: The Tryout'

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Smuttyandfun over 2 years ago

Really good. 5Stars. Poor Rob, hope he finds his HEA. Looking forward to part 3.

Demosthenes384bc about 2 years ago

Lot of ground covered in short of time. I feel like we missed something as Deanna gets only a few word mention in the end. Doesn’t fit where you placed her in the story. 4*

silentsound over 1 year ago

Lost interest.

Erin turned out to be nothing more than a stupid sluts and then the author is going to jump three decades into the future. Game over and who really cares?

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