All Comments on 'Choices Pt. 04: The Chance'

Enjoying the story. Keep it up.

Great continuation. Hope he makes the right choice. Looking forward to reading the rest. 5 Stars!

Very disappointing. He hasn’t been close to Deanna for over 30 years and ends his rekindled romance over Erin’s concerns?

Well written with great character development. Choices, choices, choices, will he make the right one, can't wait to see the net chapter. Well done 5+++++stars

Nice reversal. 5*

If, as it seems, Erin created that picture in her mind of Rob and Deana having an affair of some kind back when, she certainly did so to alleviate her feelings of guilt and, possibly, moral inferiority. I think Rob doesn't stand a chance to convince her of the truth. This disparity in perception will always have the potential to fuse further conflicts, even if Rob makes the choice Erin demands of him. I'm not calling this a no-brainer, but it's time for Rob to put this picture or idea of Erin he's in love with into the realm of myths and sagas, where it belongs.

wow! And this is between people who haven't been seen in 30 years?

People in their fifties?