Christian College Sex Comedy Ch. 19

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"But?" she prodded me.

"Gabrielle, your body is a roadmap of pain, suffering, and death," I shrugged, "and there is no damn way you came to this school legally."

Gabrielle studied me in a way that made an icy fist grasp my heart.

"Of course, I am hardly a poster child for someone who does belong at FFU. Are you going to kill me now or do you want me to continue?" I inquired hopefully.

"Mr. Braxton -- Zane, the wiring in this place is sub-standard and clearly unauthorized. I would choke you unconscious, put you in the hot tub, then electrocute you," she informed me with the air of a professor describing the events of tenth century Anglo-Saxon England.

"I will not do this right now because you are terrified of me, which shows a great deal of insight and intelligence, somewhat remarkable in someone so young," she added.

"Okay. Something allowed you to slip past the Psych Evaluation to get into someone's military; I could put that down to being experience with the system plus being clever enough to fool the testers," I said.

"Once inside, something fucked up your perception of authority -- something not good. I figure you are obsessed with physical defense, bi-sexual, yet your sexual attitude toward me is one of contempt. Since you don't know me enough to hold me in contempt yet, you were abused by a man in authority over you," I delivered the bad news. Gabrielle did not respond.

"This is total conjecture but it patches in with what comes later; you entered some kind of actual combat duty. You learned not only that you were good at killing but you liked it. It substituted for sexual release and that whole risk-pain thing you have kept until today. I count six bullet wounds, a knife wound on the back above the right kidney, and two things I guess are shrapnel wounds but I've never seen any before to compare," I added.

"I imagine you got out of the regular service because the level of your medical care diminished for a while, then -- Bang! -- you got this expensive plastic surgery. You do okay for maybe three years, then you pick up that nick in your left ankle, followed by the shoulder getting done," I said.

"No indications of why these two injuries?" she narrowed her eyes.

"I'm going to go all James Bond on you. Gabrielle Black fell for somebody hard and I'm betting it was a woman. It is kind of frightening to think of what kind of psycho she was to lure you in and trap you," A light flickered in her eyes when I went down this path. "You guarded her, became very close to her as a parade of lovers passed through her life until she sucked you in."

"One day you found yourself killing for her and I doubt you asked why. I doubt there was only one time but in the end, it was never enough. One night you came back and found this year's model on the payroll. Gabrielle Black is way too smart to wait for this to play out. You loved her but you liked living more, so you escaped before you were introduced to your employer's retirement plan," I grimaced.

"You came back to the United States -- your accent indicates time in France or Italy -- and this job fell into your lap. Lancaster, Virginia is out of the way enough for you to hide in while close enough to several major cities for you to move around if you need to, so you edit your work record and hire on at an all-girls university," I finished. "What now?"

"I don't kill you and Vivian. Making two deaths look like an accident would be incredibly difficult; murder-suicide would only make your female cohorts dig deeper and there are some serious advantages in staying here for me," she stated. Sensing my confusion, she clarified. "Vivian has been awake for some time observing us but I doubt she can hear what we are saying."

Gabrielle finished redressing; she gave me a once-over.

"My turn. What makes you hard? Seriously, you have been perpetually aroused since I've met you," she mused.

"There is a bit of a list: fear, joy, sunlight, moonlight, sex, the impossibility of sex..." I informed her.

"I understand," Gabrielle cut me off. "Who are you going to tell?"

"Christina Buchanan, Cordelia Dresden, and Dana Gorman." I decided that lying would do me worse than no good; I might get one or two lies past Gabrielle and this wasn't the time to waste one.

"Good enough. But if there are repercussions from tonight, I will feel far less tolerant toward you," she made sure I understood. I was happy that this looked like a painless parting of the ways.

"Thank you," I spoke to her retreating form. She looked over her shoulder questioningly. "For taking me seriously," I explained. She gave a curt nod, turned, and departed. Vivian pretended to be asleep when I returned to bed and I let her. It seemed like the rare sane thing for me to do.

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(If you are looking for the sex go to Chapter 21 where plenty exists.)

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FinalStandFinalStandover 5 years agoAuthor
JC_The_Continuer ...

... your explanation sound much better than what I had in mind ... so I'm going with your version instead. Thanks for the input.

As always, take care,

James aka FinalStand

JC_The_ContinuerJC_The_Continuerover 5 years ago
Oh boy

"That's good to know," Josh nodded, "and I'm here to represent the corporation's interests – in this case, avoiding embarrassment to the company's executive branch."

Soooo. the whole sex tapes on video and online for the world to see aren't doing that?

I say there is far more to it that than. I thin Cordelle is blanking out a lot of the imagery of the actual sex but leaving face and noise as they should be. It would explain why the 'Soccer' captain from the other town (Bowden?) wanted to get a look at zane, because shed seen him blurred out beneath the waist without clothes and not blurred when clothed, but as we all know; on screen isn't the same as real life.

it would clear up some of the issues alongside give cordelle something to hold over zane, the reveal of the unobstructed videos going out there and would build on their... relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Thanks!

Thanks for checking in on the new chapters. I've been waiting for them, not just for the sex, but for the plot and characters.

FinalStandFinalStandabout 11 years agoAuthor
Submissions

Chapter 20 was submitted on May 8th and 21 & 22 were submitted on the 9th, so I'm not sure what the problem is. Usually if there is a problem they have told me about it by now. I firing off an e-mail as I make this comment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

How long does it typically take after submitting a story before it's posted?

FinalStandFinalStandabout 11 years agoAuthor
More coming soon

As of 5/9/13 (or 9/5/13 for those outside the US), 20,21 & 22 have been submitted and should be up very soon. 23 is with the editor and 24 is at the 2500 work mark, so things are still chugging along (and now that Elementary is off, it will grow). Each chapter runs between 8-12K words, depending on where a good stopping point is, in case you care.

FYI, I know I have promised to work on several other story lines. I am trying but unfortunately my health has been suck-tastic recently so my keyboard is making promises I have trouble keeping. I do apologize.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I keep coming back every day to see if the next one is released. You've got me hooked!

FinalStandFinalStandabout 11 years agoAuthor
Ha!

Paraphrasing one of Zane's earlier comments: He is in Hell; God is torturing him with the thing he loves the most - Sex.

Yes, the Universe is full of well-hung studs who shoot gallons...and gallons...and gallons. Zane's little fellas are still at the starting gate going "Come on Guy! It's her freaking ass! No one is going to get pregnant!!!! Let us go, damn it!"

On an actually useful note: Chapters 20 & 21 are still with my wonderful editor (she has a life where as I spend half the day at my computer) and Chapter 22 should be done tonight and 23 is already outlined.

Finally, I rarely introduce someone as a one-shot. It may take a few chapters but you will see them again. I really have long term plans for this story (the whole Kappa Sigma - Spring Break story line as an example). I didn't want to say !Bang! Zane's at Spring Break and intrigue ensues. I want my readers to watch the threads unfold and have already figured the most likely outcomes based on what they've read before (and the knowledge that I'm a sucker for happy endings).

But Pastor William starts to cast his shadow in Chapter One and keeps showing up on every Sunday. Paige doesn't appear out of the ether, she shows up being her bratty self in 11 then again in 14. If you look back, she actually is a stalker but I hope it wasn't obvious to anyone that she was - she was supposed to be clever about it.

I hope my story comes across as more organic and less contrived (beyond the impossibility of it all). Again, I would like to thank everyone for their kindness as I've set this tale before you.

LancerInLALancerInLAabout 11 years ago
Too funny

In the last 2 chapters (2 days in the life of Zane), he has been with 8 women. 3 with penetration and the 5 Kappas. Without cumming.

With the amount of sex he has been having, I think blue balls would be an understatement.

Love the curveball with the new security chief.

Love the series. Current count for me. 2 got 4*, 17 got 5*.

One note. You have done an amazing job on trying to keep all the characters names unique and memorable. But, for the casual reader, it is becoming a bit overwhelming. I had to look back in previous chapters for some of the girls to remember their character. Do you have them mapped out in your mind? Or on a spreadsheet? Lots of puzzle pieces.

Keep it up as long as you are entertained, we readers are the benefits of all your effort, thank you.

Val

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Cruel Tease

Don't have Chapter 21 yet to go to.

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